Bonjour, j'ai juste besoin qu'on me corrige si j'ai fais des fautes. I chose Karl Howell Behr as survivor, he was born on May 30th, 1885, to Brodelyn in New Yor
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Bonjour, j'ai juste besoin qu'on me corrige si j'ai fais des fautes.
I chose Karl Howell Behr as survivor, he was born on May 30th, 1885, to Brodelyn in New York, he is American. Karl was a well known tennis star, playing on the United States Davis Cup team in 1907. It is also the vice-president of Dillon, Read & Co, this is a bank. He boarded the Titanic as a first class passenger, his ticket cost him 30£. Karl and Miss Newson were married after disaster, and the couple had four children: Karl Howell Behr Junior, Peter Behr, and James Behr, then a girl, Sally Behr. He formed a commitee to honour the bravery of captain Rostron and his crew. He died on 15 october 1943 in New Jersey.
I chose Karl Howell Behr as survivor, he was born on May 30th, 1885, to Brodelyn in New York, he is American. Karl was a well known tennis star, playing on the United States Davis Cup team in 1907. It is also the vice-president of Dillon, Read & Co, this is a bank. He boarded the Titanic as a first class passenger, his ticket cost him 30£. Karl and Miss Newson were married after disaster, and the couple had four children: Karl Howell Behr Junior, Peter Behr, and James Behr, then a girl, Sally Behr. He formed a commitee to honour the bravery of captain Rostron and his crew. He died on 15 october 1943 in New Jersey.
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1. Réponse besma12
A ce que je vois, il n'y a pas de fautes. :) -
2. Réponse kamihate
J ai donc ré vérifier, je n ai pas vu de fautes, ton textes parai juste!